Memories of Love Broken In Casts

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Teen Poetry #8

Memories of Love Broken In Casts

thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2007-09-12 10:47 PM

Knives fall short beneath my skin,
Drawing death on canvas, frail and thin
Talk grows cheap by air in my veins
Turn me aside in wicked games

Feel the future and tell it a secret,
Blow me a kiss and sell me a ticket,
Front row seat to cheer and adore
Demons dance on the soul of this boy

Deep and enchanted, wondrous and gifted,
Silence becomes ones who have lifted
Beauty and sadness away from the mark,
Falsehood and hate alone in the dark

Save my soul, I pray to a god,
Hold me close, I dream in a toss,
Repair this boy alone in the dark,
Silently praying for healing to spark
…Times of bliss achieved in his past,
…Memories of love broken in casts

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-09-14 11:54 AM

wow this was amazig I loved it the flow was really good.
Krysti

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2007-09-15 11:27 AM

not just the flow the style and elegance of your words are astounding. in other words im saying your mind is a tresure and your words are spun in gold. great job.

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-09-16 10:23 PM

wow it just flowed so wonderfully and it seemed to pick up tempo in my head i loved it because it is so well written i can't wait for another poem

buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

4 posted 2007-09-18 01:58 AM

this was absolutely.. fantastic

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