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Teen Poetry #8

Sleeping with You

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2007-09-07 11:21 PM

Snuggled up under the covers,
breathing slow and deep.
On my side with your arm as a pillow,
just watching you be asleep.
You wake up a little,
give me a smile and a kiss,
I feel my heart stutter and an answering smile
spread slowly across my lips.

We didn't do anything last night,
and though my virtue's far from intact,
I couldn't bring myself to start,
and fell asleep with your chest at my back.
Now you pull me closer,
and I go with a soft sound.
Your hands skim my waist, your lips touch my neck,
and the blankets get pushed to the ground.

It was never just about sex,
although it was kinda close at first.
Now it's about us loving each other,
sometimes so much it hurts.
Accepting one another's faults,
even though I can't find yours.
Me telling you a dirty little secret,
and you telling me one to even the score.

The way you laugh in the morning,
the way you smile at night,
the way you whisper, "I love you, babe,"
that makes my chest squeeze up tight.
You're in ever part of my life,
there's nothing you couldn't get me to do.
And while I'm always open to other options,
I'm happy just to sleep with you.

We do not write because we want to,
we write because we have to.
-W. Somerset Maugham

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-09-11 03:28 PM

that was a beautiful poem and if this was written about a certain someone they are very lucky to have someone to care for them so much well done

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-09-12 02:15 PM

oh wow, that was amazing. So easy to relate to it's like you read my mind

great write
Krysti.

andrey
Junior Member

since 2007-04-27

Posts 29

3 posted 2007-10-06 04:58 PM

Perfect!

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

4 posted 2007-10-06 11:33 PM

that was so beautiful, i could relate to that back in the day. but i dont think i could have put it in to such beautiful words. it was a great read.

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