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breaking point |
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Alex pb Junior Member
since 2007-07-25
Posts 22Arizona |
lies and deception, scathe my heart.. slowly taking apart my soul this peak of rage... pounding my happiness... reaching the point... shattering.... trying to hold the pieces together... collapsing, falling into this darkness... searching for this hope... The hope of revivification of happiness... For my heart heart and soul To let my body live with a true heart... And not with an emptty casket without love.. For this.. I ask... My one true angel.. Do not give me a casket... Give me my heart... |
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haiXraab Junior Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 10 |
 i was happy whenyou showed me this poem..cuz its your first dark poem iloveyoualexis yer my bfffffffffffffe |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
I really liked this poem, great job "in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop" |
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