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rhia_5779
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0 posted 2007-08-21 01:36 AM


Its all too easy to hurt another when
You hurt so bad yourself you can’t tell the difference.
There should be some rule against this type of mindless
Pain, but then
If there were rules……
that wouldn’t be life would it?

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-08-21 02:48 PM


The beginning really rang out for me, I heard the truth in it.
Krysti


~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

[This message has been edited by hunnie_girl (08-22-2007 12:31 AM).]

BrittanyJ
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2 posted 2007-08-21 10:46 PM


Mmmm, i really liked this. It was very well said

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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