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Teen Poetry #8

all that ive wanted

Alex pb
Junior Member

since 2007-07-25

Posts 22
Arizona

0 posted 2007-08-20 08:36 PM

substance and wealth meaningless
emotion the real treasure
grabbing, taking hearts for love and beyond
holding on to a happiness

all around me, joy
love of a bond so pure...
not a single spot of darkness
clear, unstoppable compassion

giving true life
of endless happiness....
wanting, hoping, for your love
from this compassionate angel....

up, i see her
her star lit eyes
her night lit lips...
her beautiful moon lit face...

night, to my beautiful angel...

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

1 posted 2007-08-20 10:52 PM

o0o, romantic...i like the star lit, night lit, and moon lit...nice

-J

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2007-08-21 03:43 PM

"night, to my beautiful angel"

Fave line. Loved it!

Rerra

dah1namedj0na
Junior Member

since 2007-08-19

Posts 19

3 posted 2007-08-22 10:16 PM

wow, that took many readings to understand. I finally found out that all you've wanted was your "angel". It's short but the message is clear. I liked this poem!

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