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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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0 posted 2007-08-21 07:56 PM



The Wonder of Wishes

Give me some wings
Then show me how
To fly ‘cross the sky
Could we go now?

I’m tired of walking
I want to fly
I’m tired of answers
I want a why

To take up romance
And leave it to chance
To get up and sing
To fall for a king

I wish for the stars
To fall to the ground
And make earth a heaven
That I have found

But I’m gone ‘til tomorrow
And here ‘til today
I’m praying my heart out
For things same to stay

To take up romance
And leave it to chance
To get up and sing
To fall for a king . . .

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
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1 posted 2007-08-21 10:53 PM


I really liked this red!! It's not my fav by you, but it's very high up there

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

dah1namedj0na
Junior Member
since 2007-08-19
Posts 19

2 posted 2007-08-22 10:18 PM


hmm, it still makes me think when i read it. But the symbolism is really clear about wanting to fly. nice job done

PS. if you really want to fly drink red bull :P


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