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Alex pb
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0 posted 2007-08-16 06:29 PM



sweet in its nature,
An angels skin, a texture so happy,

Soft lips, a virgins existence
one kiss lasts a lifetime

her broad beauty attracts many
pitiful of the plenty

Attracted to one....
his truth and patience shows among the many...

Her essence makes him weak
She comes from the heavenly skies

To give the truthful man without lies
A sweet virgin kiss of an angel....

As they bond by this kiss...
this sweet beauty reaches his heart
through his pain...

and to his soul....

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haiXraab
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since 2007-07-29
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1 posted 2007-08-16 06:34 PM


OH MY GOD!THATS FRAKIN AMAZING!!!!
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2 posted 2007-08-17 12:28 PM


woah, I really liked this it was so cute
Krysti

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3 posted 2007-08-17 09:26 PM


oooh...I loved this. So good.

Pen

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