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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2007-08-15 09:27 PM





If there was a simpler way
I would tell you
All you mean to me
I would, I would

If I could fly
I would fly to you today
But I can’t, I can’t
Because I don’t try

So take me
Kiss my tearless face
But don’t you worry
It’s just my dreams speaking

I find I almost
Have something like love
Towards you
Almost like love

This is the easiest thing
That I’ve ever written
And now I’m wondering why
Wondering why

This is more than just a poem
This more than just a song
These are the lyrical lines
I’ve written in my mind

And if for one day
The truth comes out
I could never bare face
In all of its doubt

You say I’m an angel
You say I’m fool
You say that I’ve promised you
It’s all I could do

So I’ll be an angel
I’ll play a fool
I’ll be your beggar
And I’ll be your savoir
What ever you need

Because . . .
I need you


"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (08-16-2007 09:20 AM).]

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1 posted 2007-08-16 01:16 AM


I really liked this. I know where you are coming from. if you are looking for a title how about I need you?... very nicely written
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2007-08-16 09:04 PM


aww, i've felt this before. I really liked this red! It was very moving

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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