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wwzwlmd8 Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96San Diego,CA |
Love is easy to give and easy to get, Love is a spcial thing and if you lose it you might regret, Love is happiness and sadness,love is all around us, Love can be given by famliy,firend's,and other's so give love to one another,pace. [This message has been edited by wwzwlmd8 (09-24-2006 04:30 PM).] |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow i liked this it has potential but try shaping your poem like: Love is easy to give and easy to get, Love is a spcial thing and if you lose it you might regret, Love is happiness and sadness,love is all around us, Love can be given by famliy,friend's,and other's so give love to one another, peace. it's just a suggestion but i think it makes it a lot easier to read good poem... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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wwzwlmd8 Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96San Diego,CA |
Thank you for the tip. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep...exactly that... it makes it easier to read...  I enjoyed this |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I enjoyed this one by you, I would just simply suggest checking your grammar and spelling before posting. But, nice job! Welcome to Pip! ~Alli~ |
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