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Teen Poetry #8

Too Much Today

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-08-03 10:27 AM

Rain is coming down in sheets
On my usually happy persona
I don't know what to do
Has everything really gone wrong?

I wanna stay in bed
So I don't have to face the light
Something's wrong with me
I never give up without a fight

I need to know that I'll be okay
That I'll live to see another day
I have so much to say
But I've already said too much today

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-08-03 10:30 AM

"I have so much to say
But I've already said too much today"

This is how i feel exactly

I really liked this line, but i loved the whole thing!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-08-03 03:55 PM

I have so much to say
But I've already said too much today~

Wow it's like you entered my mind with this poem I loved it.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-08-03 10:02 PM

it was a wonderful poem there has been a many a time i have felt like this and my favourite lines are the last two they are just perfect

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

4 posted 2007-08-05 01:23 AM

I have so much to say
But I've already said too much today

I can soo relate.. THose are also my favorite lines

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