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Teen Poetry #8

Sunset

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

0 posted 2007-08-02 05:10 PM

Watching the glamorous sunset
Disappear from the bright blue sky
Thinking only of you
Looking into your beautiful eyes

As the stars come out one by one
I will never forget
That true feeling of love
Not a hint of regret

And as I look above
To the heavens and the stars
Knowing you are with me
Its like the whole world is only ours

As we lie there…
All night long
I know at this moment
In your arms, is where I belong

I wake in the morning
To a feeling of a kiss
As the sun starts to rise
I am touched by your sweet lips

I will always love you
Never will we part
And I’ll always remember that sunset
The day you stole my heart

"in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop"

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-08-02 05:21 PM

"I will always love you
Never will we part
And I’ll always remember that sunset
The day you stole my heart"

Wow, this was so beautiful!! I'm glad you've found someone special

Amazing poem!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

2 posted 2007-08-02 07:26 PM

Thank's very much, I haven't posted here in a while so I didnt know if anyone would like it hehe but thank you again!

"in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop"

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-08-03 02:35 AM

this was so sweet, Good to have you come back here

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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