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my affliction
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my affliction |
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Alex pb Junior Member
since 2007-07-25
Posts 22Arizona |
my affliction my grief of the pain grows with every second this anguish grows deep within my affection my incompetent heart unable to comprehend her grace her adroitness allures me to her... unable to keep my heart away, it slips into her hands..... her elegant hands grasp my stiched together heart... slowly healing my scars... her delicate hands slowly push my heart away as if she has an animosity for my heart i lock my arms beside my body for i deny my own heart push by push she tries gives it back... i deny it over and over for i am not human without love.... my sweet sweet love.... |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
oh...wow... loved it. Beyond words... Great Job. Pen |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Beautiful  Absolutly beautiful. Nicely done!So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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haiXraab Junior Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 10 |
i love your poems absolutly amazing |
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Robbie New Member
since 2007-04-08
Posts 8 |
Wow. That is pretty awesome man. Definitely keep writing. |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
great poem |
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