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a days beauty |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is 
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in the early morning as the sun lights the sky a breeze cools my face and i lose all sense of mind soft white clouds slowly fade to pink and red once heartbreaking thoughts now i can't comprehend the yellow sun climbs higher to colors the grey has faded they now match vibrant daises that sway ubove my head rays of light gently warm my stiffened body a more soothing feeling, will there ever be? in the middle of the sky the sun has found its way blue all around the clouds have come to play wind blowing a bit harder to cool down the heated air as if to answer the earth's daily prayer growing shadows make these things seems much bigger twilight is approaching, once again clouds lit with color one by one stars appear as the air gets cold beauty in this colorful day has lightened my soul looking up at sparkling skies silence fill my ears my heart is taken by surprise, its now become so clear nothing would be in existance without your awesome power you, my god are this beauty, the creator. ~bec i know i said sun too much...haha and i think the third parr needs a bit of work, but i thought i'd post it anyways! = ) |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I thought it was beautiful  Wonderfully written.So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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jayjara Member
since 2007-05-02
Posts 90Florida |
I want to see more of your stuff -J |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
I thought it was really good, great job! "in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop" |
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