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Teen Poetry #8

The Circle Of Life

mgoodman1989
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

0 posted 2007-07-26 06:03 PM

Baby
Insistant
Restless
Teething
Hungry

Clever
Helpless
Illtempored
Laughter
Discipline

Testy
Eager
Empty
Naughty
Angry
Greedy
Entertaining
Ready

Alcohol
Danger
Unhappy
Labor
Trustworthy

Decaying
End
Awful
Terrible
Helpless

*I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!*

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-07-26 10:37 PM

i like it

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2007-08-24 09:59 AM

Hey,

Long time no see mgoodman! I liked this one a lot, too me a minute to catch on because I'm an idiot but awesome setup. I liked how when you switched from one cycle to another the words were really meant for that "stage" of life.

Thanks for sharing!

"The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away"
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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-08-25 11:49 AM

I loved this circle of life thing so very... true

Krysti

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