Teen Poetry #8 |
This Game |
WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
~Not sure where this came from, lol, but here it is...~ You call me late at three in the morning, Give me a place and a time, And I go there without question, Without reason or rhyme. You tell me that you’re going to leave her, Insist you’re in love with me. But I’m getting kind of tired of The sneaking around, the secrecy. At first I wasn’t worried, You said she didn’t get you. But now I’m a little scared, Now that I’ve more than met you. Because I know that if you’ll cheat with me, You’ll cheat on me, too. I’m wondering, with a tint of despair, Will I ever be able to trust you? So I’m standing before you, With my heart on my sleeve. I’m asking you, begging, really, Please leave her for me? I know it will be hard, I know it will be tough, But if you don’t, I’m out of here, Because this just isn’t enough. I’m tired of the lying, I’m tired of the pain. So I’m letting myself get out, Get out of playing this game. I'm the literary equivalent of a Big Mac and Fries. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i love it. and if this is real life, hard, but leave the loser and find some one dependable. men who cheat once, usually cheat again. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
what RRRR said....for sure...they will again and again and it's not like you can say you didn't know he would |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"I’m tired of the lying, I’m tired of the pain. So I’m letting myself get out, Get out of playing this game." I agree with Red and SEA. If they've chested with you, then they'll cheat on you. Dump him for sure Loved the poem!! So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
i think that this was amazing |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
loved it the way you made cheating a game was just an amazing grouping together this was a great job |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
woah I loved the way this flowed and the content was really good too. Another great poem hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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