Teen Poetry #8 |
Life's Dance Floor |
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Every Beating Heart dances to a beat some are unaware of the steps they take on their way across Life's Dance Floor I Am One Of Those unsure of the dance I am dancing its beat, its tempo pacing fast then slow then faster Than My Feet Can Manage But Sometimes The Steps Repeat and then it seems my feet know their way across life's dance floor And I Know I Don't Need To Be In Someone's Arms To Hold My Own On Life's Dance Floor [This message has been edited by pen&paper (07-25-2007 08:47 PM).] |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"And I Know I Don't Need To Be In Someone's Arms To Hold My Own On Life's Dance Floor" Wow...i never thought of it like that I really, really liked it!! Nice job. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh I really liked the last 2 lines very nice hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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