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0 posted 2007-07-25 07:38 PM


Every Beating Heart
dances to a beat
some are unaware
of the steps they take
on their way across
Life's Dance Floor


I Am One Of Those
unsure
of the dance I am dancing
its beat, its tempo
pacing fast
then slow
then faster
Than My Feet Can Manage


But Sometimes


The Steps Repeat
and then it seems
my feet
know their way
across life's dance floor
And I Know I Don't Need


To Be In Someone's Arms To Hold My Own
On Life's Dance Floor

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (07-25-2007 08:47 PM).]

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BrittanyJ
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1 posted 2007-07-25 08:03 PM


"And I Know I Don't Need
To Be In Someone's Arms To Hold My Own
On Life's Dance Floor"

Wow...i never thought of it like that I really, really liked it!! Nice job.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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2 posted 2007-07-26 03:10 PM


ohh I really liked the last 2 lines very nice
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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