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Teen Poetry #8

faliing (im crushed)

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-07-24 09:45 PM

i wish i would stop falling
and i could just die in peace

but the fall goes on forever
its relentless and its cold
and when all this goes away
whos hand will you hold

who will be there in the end
through the tears and through the blood
dont forget we made an oath
theres nothin we could have done

but you could have saved me from my fall
you could have let me die in peace
and know that i was happy
or trying to be at least

theres not much to be done
because your face has said it all
you chose to turn away
and let me continue with my fall

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-24 10:18 PM

"you chose to turn away
and let me continue with my fall"

I am with ya man. Been there, and it sucks. If ya ever need to talk i pretty much live here

Oh, and by the way...i liked this. It was very enjoyable.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

2 posted 2007-07-24 11:20 PM

Another masterpiece.

I'm the literary equivalent of a Big Mac and Fries.
- Stephen King

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-25 12:45 PM

woah yes I must agree another masterpeice

great poem OC
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2007-07-25 01:10 AM

its CO but whatever. and thanks alot guys.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-07-25 08:41 AM

now this one i liked alot. it's a library piece.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2007-07-26 03:05 PM

oopps 'm sorry I know that must have been typing too fast sorry CO...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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