Teen Poetry #8 |
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faliing (im crushed) |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN ![]() |
i wish i would stop falling and i could just die in peace but the fall goes on forever its relentless and its cold and when all this goes away whos hand will you hold who will be there in the end through the tears and through the blood dont forget we made an oath theres nothin we could have done but you could have saved me from my fall you could have let me die in peace and know that i was happy or trying to be at least theres not much to be done because your face has said it all you chose to turn away and let me continue with my fall |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"you chose to turn away and let me continue with my fall" I am with ya man. Been there, and it sucks. If ya ever need to talk i pretty much live here ![]() So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
Another masterpiece. I'm the literary equivalent of a Big Mac and Fries. |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
woah yes I must agree another masterpeice ![]() hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
its CO but whatever. and thanks alot guys. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
now this one i liked alot. it's a library piece. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
oopps 'm sorry I know that must have been typing too fast sorry CO... hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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