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silent screams |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work 
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 The words spew from my mouth speaking all that I know but no one can hear this scream that I screamed to try to tell you but you can’t hear no one….can hear The trembling in my voice showing all my fear the dreams that I follow the hopes I speak of ….no one can hear this rage I swallow because no one can hear ~my silent screams ~Jezzika~ One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I really really like this I can realte so much. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jezzika~ You have such a wonderful talent~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
Thanks you guys for your awesome replies...  One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
magnifique! it's beautiful. i feel like that all the time. love it. so gald i was looking through the older ones. i enjoyed this one. "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Jezzika...Great write. Felt your emotion in every line...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
aww...thanks guys.. |
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StormyB Junior Member
since 2007-07-18
Posts 42Ohio Usa |
Very nice, looking forward to reading more. |
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sexykitten15 Junior Member
since 2007-07-22
Posts 34 |
I can relate to that so much!! I loved it!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
what's fun? Even your mom can relate to it  love ya kid... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can remember the feel of this... and I know that sometimes, even in my dreams, now, today... I can still feel the shivers from that silent wrenching sound. Well done, darling! |
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