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BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

0 posted 2007-07-24 09:18 PM

I've fallen for you
Time and again.
And forgiven you
For all of your sin.

But you've gone too far,
You've torn me apart.
And maybe i'd be over it
If cupid had a heart.

But here i am again,
Waiting there for you.
You'd think i'd be mad,
after all you've put me through.

One too many times,
He's hit me with his dart.
I would have been okay,
If cupid had a heart.

I just wanna leave,
You've hurt me enough.
I don't want to deal
With all of this stuff.

I knew it would end,
Right from the start.
It wouldn't have lasted this long,
If cupid had a heart.

But i'm begging you now,
In case you might hear.
I need to let go,
I've shed to many tears.

I 'm going to walk away now,
And look for a new start.
Please don't shoot me cupid,
If you have a heart.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-07-24 09:31 PM

oh I love this, having cupis in the poem and everything I never took this into perspective like this before. really great

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2007-07-24 09:47 PM

wow i like this alot. i have felt similar to this in the past and i can relate. i love this poem very much it was a nice read.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-07-24 10:20 PM

Thanks guys

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2007-07-24 10:27 PM

i like how you refrenced how cupid might not have a heart and that he was doing this sorta like dispite you very nice job

StormyB
Junior Member

since 2007-07-18

Posts 42
Ohio Usa

5 posted 2007-07-24 10:41 PM

Awsome, I loved it. This piece had a gripping flow to it.

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

6 posted 2007-07-25 01:45 AM

This is absolutely amazing! Very well-written and good flow. Amazing!

I'm the literary equivalent of a Big Mac and Fries.
- Stephen King

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

7 posted 2007-07-25 08:43 AM

i loved it! it's one of my favorites from you. i'm looking forward to your next peice.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Yogurt
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

8 posted 2007-07-25 02:29 PM

i love it, it seem your poetry really comes from the heart^_^

A time to kill, and a time to heal;
A time to break down, and a time to build up;
A time to weep, and a time to laugh;
A time to mourn

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