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Teen Poetry #8

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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-07-24 10:18 AM

rapid and violent
i hear the storm
and across the ocean
the mountains are born

tall like the giants
that stretch across the land
the ocean is angry
the montains are feeling it bad.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-24 10:59 AM

"rapid and violent
i hear the storm"

It wasn't my favorite by you, but it was still amazing

Nicely done.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-07-24 12:27 PM

not my favorite, but still good. looking forward to your next.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Yogurt
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-24 02:39 PM

i like this one ur like an awsome writer^_^

A time to kill, and a time to heal;
A time to break down, and a time to build up;
A time to weep, and a time to laugh;
A time to mourn, and a time

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2007-07-24 10:26 PM

i like the first stanza it was awsome and just flowed and went together sooooo well can't wait till your next one

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

5 posted 2007-07-25 01:33 AM

I agree, it's not my absolute favorite, but it's hard to beat my favorite by you, so that's okay. It's still amazing, though, very nice imagery.

I'm the literary equivalent of a Big Mac and Fries.
- Stephen King

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