Teen Poetry #8 |
Running |
Sarena New Member
since 2007-07-24
Posts 1Iowa, U.S.A. |
Run thats all,thats it, you told me running will make you feel stress free run I said thats all it takes, running is such a big mistake run, you said, won't get in trouble I swear run away from there I watched you run,then I did too don't know why seemed like the cool thing to do run, I told myself I'll be just fine, so I started running away all the time I became addicted, I need to runaway a few more times, I told myself won't do any harm but then one day my mom snitched what are you doing, why'd you leave, where'd you go these are the questions that she said, as all the memories rushed through my head I got help and now I'm better so I wrote you this letter when I got home I asked where you were she never got help mom said something terrible happened to her running thats all, thats it, you said you almost wound up dead I know running is all it takes but running is a HUGE mistake! Rena Roo |
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Yogurt Junior Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 18Canada |
Omg I love it Is it about you runnning away because i can relate A time to kill, and a time to heal; |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
woah this was so I don't know vivid I understood it really well. Welcome to Passions:0 hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I can't tell you how many times that i have thought the same thing. But it won't solve any problems. It makes them go away for a while, but they always come back. Wonderful poem And welcome to pip. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
well let me just say..."a very astonishing entrence into piptalk" i loved it |
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