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sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

0 posted 2007-07-22 01:21 PM

I know i’m young
But what can I say I want that fairytale love.
Maybe not now…maybe not ever
But I want it.
When ever I think about that one guy.
I stop breathing because my heart beats just for him.
I can’t help it.
But I know that I really like him.
I see him…my heart beats faster I think i’m going to die.
I see his name pop up on the computer screen
And I just about jump out of my seat.
I know it’s wrong.
And I know that people are disgusted in me for liking him.
But I can’t change how I feel.
I am tired.
I need to sleep
I am hungry
I need to eat.
I can’t and wont until he knows how I feel.
Not a moment passes by that he doesn’t cross my mind.
I don’t think I have ever felt this way before.
I have waited my entire life for a guy like him.
And now he is out of my reach.
I feel the air get colder.
I feel nothing anymore…
My life quickly begins to fade away.
I finally know that he knows so I shall be gone.
I shall leave him at peace.
And I shall live with the pain that I brought upon myself.
I have dug my grave so I shall lie in it.
My headstone has only 5 words…
“Why didn’t you want me?”

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-22 02:45 PM

"My headstone has only 5 words…
“Why didn’t you want me?”"

I really enjoyed this piece. I just recently felt that way about someone who could have cared less if i was dead or alive, so i feel your pain

Nice write.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-07-22 03:54 PM

wow, the first part reminded me of one of my poems, i think you would like it- fairytale envy. wonderful- i loved the ending.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-23 07:00 PM

yes the ending just belw me away I loved it, great write.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

4 posted 2007-07-23 10:05 PM

I loved this..
The ending was awesome...

I totally can relate to this it is so frustrating when you like a guy that much and then the feelings aren't returned

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

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