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Teen Poetry #8

The Best Kind

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-21 06:58 PM

I'm really gonna miss you,
when I set off far away,
I'll be longing to kiss you,
every hour of everyday,

it's gonna be so hard,
knowing that we're this far apart
When I let down my gaurd,
you captured my heart,

before I leave I want you to know,
that you'll be in my mind,
no matter where I go,
'cos a love like ours is the best kind.

~for Logan

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

[This message has been edited by hunnie_girl (07-23-2007 06:58 PM).]

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-07-21 08:31 PM

wow i liked it and it kind of explains the situtation a person i know is in almost to a dot

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-07-21 10:04 PM

i think my favorite part is seeing who it was dedicated to. it's always so suprising and calming to see the face behind the mask.
though the poem was very touching as well.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-07-21 11:49 PM

Awww!! hunnie!!! I'm so happy for you

It is such a touching poem...i loved seeing who it was dedicated to. That made it seem more...um, where's the word i'm lookin for...personal!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

4 posted 2007-07-22 02:44 AM

aww that is so sweet..
i hope he saw it!

that is so adorable i loved it!

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

5 posted 2007-07-22 01:22 PM

this was way awesome....
I hate having to leave someone....

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

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