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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-20 04:40 PM

My life is in fast forward these days,
my eyes are bloodshot,I'm in a daze,
I can't even cry but I need to so bad,
'cos I just left the life i've always had,

I feel so dead or it's just me going insane,
why does it seem i'm the only one in pain,
rocking back and forth I can't even speak,
and to think I was normal just last week,

I've never felt so alone before,
I can't handle this anymore,
waking up is starting to get tough,
and no matter how much I drink it's never enough,

My life is stuck in fast forward these days,
My eyes are bloodshot,I'm in a daze

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-07-20 04:54 PM

hunnie, you stun me. your so great with words. i love it.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-07-20 05:34 PM

"I can't even cry but I need to so bad,
'cos I just left the life i've always had"

Oh my gosh hunnie!!! One of my favorite by you! I loved it

I abosolutly loved it!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Tinsel
Junior Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

3 posted 2007-07-21 08:37 AM

Awesome- like pretty much all your poems!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2007-07-21 10:22 AM

wow, i loved the rhyme scheme. it is always working out so wonderfully for you. lol.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2007-07-21 06:12 PM

thanks y'all...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

6 posted 2007-07-30 05:10 PM

Thanks for your comment on my recent poem, you are very expressive with yours. No bashing here you write great poetry!

littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

7 posted 2007-08-07 10:55 PM

Wow this hit so much. I enjoy your work. It's really pleasant to see. Amazing truly amazing -Tara

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