Teen Poetry #8 |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
My life is in fast forward these days, my eyes are bloodshot,I'm in a daze, I can't even cry but I need to so bad, 'cos I just left the life i've always had, I feel so dead or it's just me going insane, why does it seem i'm the only one in pain, rocking back and forth I can't even speak, and to think I was normal just last week, I've never felt so alone before, I can't handle this anymore, waking up is starting to get tough, and no matter how much I drink it's never enough, My life is stuck in fast forward these days, My eyes are bloodshot,I'm in a daze ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
hunnie, you stun me. your so great with words. i love it. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"I can't even cry but I need to so bad, 'cos I just left the life i've always had" Oh my gosh hunnie!!! One of my favorite by you! I loved it ![]() So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Tinsel Junior Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 36UK |
Awesome- like pretty much all your poems! |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow, i loved the rhyme scheme. it is always working out so wonderfully for you. lol. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thanks y'all... hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Thanks for your comment on my recent poem, you are very expressive with yours. No bashing here you write great poetry! |
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littlefairy Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51New York |
Wow this hit so much. I enjoy your work. It's really pleasant to see. Amazing truly amazing -Tara |
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