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Too Long a Past
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Too Long a Past |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Too Long a Past With eyes like shadows watches she With pride to swallow he lets her be Hoarding memories down memory lane Keeping them in her box of forgot and forgave A ring of the past, building on time A crime of the present, one which is mine Expanding forever into bands unbroken A place where words of rest never spoken The kiss of death, bitter and not sweet Young and alive taken by the heat The death of heart, not of body or soul Pain that is coming is the money for toll With eyes like shadows watches she With pride unswallowed he lets her be "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
this is so beautifully wrriten Red. I loved the flow... one of my favorites by you.(well other than the series you wrote):P hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"With eyes like shadows watches she With pride unswallowed he lets her be" This is def one of my favorite by you red!! It is amazing  I love it. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
it just read so interestingly i liked it alot |
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littlefairy Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51New York |
 beautiful. I enjoyed it. Not much else to say but wonderful. |
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