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Yogurt
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-20 02:23 PM

Let my tears fall
let the pain go
Let the hurt evaporate

Why do you like to see me in pain
How do I brake this curse

let the tears fall
let the pain go
let the hurt leave this black heart of mine

Drain my blood
Drain my love
Drain what's left of my happiness

let the world hate
leave my tears to fall
let my pain go
let the hurt die

Let me fly
give me my black wings
let my drift into the after life

Let my tears dry
let the pain drain
let the hurt out

Let me cry
Let me bleed
Let me live
Let me die

Watch me body fall
Lifeless

Let me bleed
Let my tears down
Let the pain drip dry
Let the hurt fall

Let it die
Let it go
Please just let me show

Let me fly
give me my black wings
let my drift into the after life

Let the world die
Let the hate go with it
Let it bleed
Let its tear’s fall
Let its pain go
Let the hurt evaporate

Let me live
Let me die
Let me bleed
Let my tears dry

one of my best poems i like to think

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-20 02:34 PM

Let me be the first to welcome you to pip, and say that it was a wonderful first post

I hope to read more soon.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Yogurt
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

2 posted 2007-07-20 02:45 PM

Thank you^_^

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-20 04:01 PM

Let me live
Let me die
Let me bleed
Let my tears dry~

Welcome to Passions. I like this poem a lot, the words just make so much sense

oh and great first post.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2007-07-20 04:53 PM

i liked this alot except for the me need to be changed to my here i think.

Watch me body fall
Lifeless

Tinsel
Junior Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

5 posted 2007-07-21 08:38 AM

Welcome to pip... and ace first post!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2007-07-21 10:19 AM

it's different from anything else i've ever read (good different) good first post. welcome to pip yogurt.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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