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Listen to me |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Listen to me Listen to me. I am one-hundred years of experience, Listen to me. I am what’s right and what’s wrong, Listen to me. I will steer you from your transgressions, Listen to me. I am a talking book of lessons, Listen to me. Whatever you’re going through, I went through twice, Listen to me before this record stops playing. Listen to me before you start playing. Sit and listen to what I am saying, Whoops! I’m gone, dead. You better start praying. Dedicated to my Grandpa |
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Tinsel Junior Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 36UK |
That was a really interesting poem- different, I mean. I really liked it! |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ummm, i didn't expect the ending. it threw me for a loop. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
So true  We don't ever wanna listen until it's too late. Nice poem, i enjoyed.So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Really like this, it's great seeing your face around here again too hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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