Dangerous Intentions- Part III

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-07-12 01:01 PM

this is the final installment- unless i get requests for more. otherwise this is it. i hope you all enjoyed reading them as much as i enjoyed writing them, and i must give credit to my favorite book for inspiring it- the Hollow Kingdom.

Dangerous Intentions- Part III

Touching the caps of darkness
Tonight the living nightmare
She has been so frantic lately
My lovely lady fair

She runs when no one sees her
I can almost hear her frenzied heart
After tonight a new life
One in which we will not part

She took a walk in the dusk
Against her judgment to be alone
I took her just as she came to the shadows
Her senses not fully honed

Carrying her in my arms
She’s fighting me all to well
Using every ticked she’d learned
She must feel like she’s going to hell

I bring her to the kingdom border
My people happily cheer
The gates are closed behind me
And now she’s trembling with fear

I wished that she would look at me
But I knew that she would hate
Everything about me
As I knew, also, her fate

We finally get inside
Our marriage starts off right
She’s cry silent tears
As I’m smiling in delight

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-07-17 07:27 PM

She’s cry silent tears
As I’m smiling in delight~

Oh wow this is amazing my favorite of all of them. I actually would love to hear what happens next now that it ended like that

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-07-18 08:01 AM

alright then, i'll post a something new just for you then.

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-18 01:39 PM

wow i think this is your best poem yet and i am pretty sure it has soemthng to do with your inspiration and just how you percieved it

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-07-19 11:27 PM

ohhhhh just for me

thank you thank you
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Tinsel
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since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

5 posted 2007-07-21 08:43 AM

One word:
Wowwwwww.

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