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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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0 posted 2007-07-20 02:36 PM

Especially for hunnie, whoes curiousty earned this poem. -Red

Dangerous Intentions- IV

Away from her home
Most of a week she cries
But soon she came to see
My world through happy eyes

Starting to settle down
She is different from everyone
Then we learn the startling truth
She’s accepted what was done

So now I see a smile from her
She’s learning my tongue
And my people she adores
I think that finally I have won

She comes to me and asks away
About life here and her place
And I’m glad to help her
Find her way inside my race

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-07-20 02:42 PM

i really liked this!!!!!! it was soo good. Will there be another part? (hopefully!)

Yogurt
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since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

2 posted 2007-07-20 02:42 PM

that is brillant

srry if spelling wrong hehe

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-20 04:08 PM

ohhhhh thank you thank you. Red, you are the greatest. ohhhh I love this. I just love happy endings

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

4 posted 2007-07-20 05:37 PM

Aww!!! You made it have a happy ending! Well done red

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-07-20 06:57 PM

yes pen, since you asked there will be a part V, mabe i sould just recommend the series that inspired me- it's called the hollow kingdom. by dunkle. i forget her first name but the last name is dunkle. i think if you liked the poems the book will blow you away.

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2007-07-20 06:58 PM

no wait, i have a better idea. there will not be a part V, but, there will be her side of everything, i saw sdid like a him and her, lovely, whitelielovely did that. i think i'll follow suit.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

7 posted 2007-07-20 07:23 PM

well it was a nice ending to the series of poems and i can't wait to see the womans side of the story i hope they are as well done as the other his side

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