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Teen Poetry #8

Lost innocense

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2007-07-10 07:58 PM

I am sitting here on my bed,
trying to remember the last time.
Trying to remember the last time meaning flowed from a simple kiss.

When did a hug contain any feeling,
and when did "I love you" mean just that?

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2007-07-18 02:26 AM

Hi tearsoflove13762,

I'm quite surprised and honored to be the first one to post on this piece. It has been awhile since I've read any of your work and I'm glad I didn't miss this post.

There is so much being said in these few lines, so much truth! I loved this piece a lot. I’m hoping you have more like this and I’ll be looking forward to reading your next post

"The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away"
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