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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it is strange how mornings make shadows that seem to blend into hands like strangers reaching across partial but not all the way into touching just out of reach like I imagined you but I kept you behind the glasses on purpose so I will never know really how it is to drink from your smile and walk away wanting more of your whiskey than just a few days of drunkenness perhaps more of an oblivion if they exist and would we try to find them together I will always hope you would always hope so _______________ daark |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that's a bottle that aged well on your shelf  Happy New Year Dark. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
"how it is to drink from your smile and walk away wanting more of your whiskey than just a few days of drunkenness" Dug that poet!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mysteria..thanks lady!! Happy 9 to you too. _____________ Richy, thanks guy for the read and comment |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice...my favorite line is: "reaching across partial but not all the way into touching" |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
wiping my mouth with the back of my hand I say, set me up again. Your poems always get me drunk, D. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr, thanks amigo ______________ ms indi...damn I would love to take advantage of you when you are helpless.or is it helpful...join me for drinks? thanks babe |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I will always hope you would always hope so ______________________________ that's a yes from me Mr Daark Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thank you babe... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"but I kept you behind the glasses on purpose so I will never know really how it is to drink from your smile"... M |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Cheers to that. And the thoughts behind the mask continue on too insecure to let themselves out. Good stuff! Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs....thanks babe __________________ thanks eric. |
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ms_doodiekins New Member
since 2008-08-01
Posts 6OZ |
yur poetry always makes me smile Mr D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms doodie, you smile me too |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - a most becoming writing, loved reading this one... BC |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BC..thanks amigo, I am blessed by your read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so lovely and I missed it, how comes? quote: That would be a very intense kiss I imagine. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope holds... Enjoyed, D. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thought I'd give this another read and glad I did. Lots of thought patterns in this and it's a great read. Really like this... just out of reach like I imagined you but I kept you behind the glasses on purpose so I will never know really how it is to drink from your smile Man that says a lot to me... Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thank you lady friend.. _____________ ms sun, thanks smile lady for the eyes and smile warmth _______________ eric..humble thanks guy |
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