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Open Poetry #44
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Boshii2
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since 2009-02-01
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0 posted 2009-02-03 10:30 PM

He leads her to the naked beach.
Moonlit thoughts disrobe her.
Darkened waves are the only witnesses to
Searching hands beneath the frothy lace of the sea.
And they wont tell.
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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2009-02-03 11:22 PM

Wonderfully suggestive...enjoyed! And welcome!...kat
mein or meree thanhai
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since 2009-02-01
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2 posted 2009-02-04 04:44 PM

im seeing the signature of god in ur heart.
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2009-02-04 05:31 PM

Love the suggestive ambiguity.

Very good write!

Eric
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2009-02-05 02:19 AM

wow!

I'm a fan!
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