Open Poetry #44 |
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Our Own Man of La Mancha [Sy] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
![]() Our Own Man of La Mancha What woman does not yet see this image of you, still in me through the eye of blind I feel with touch of finger, you, so real My conqueror of love, my fighter, true, now gone your ways alone, have you, without your mother as your guide, but with your Sancho, you did ride… the man you were, I saw in dream when as a child, you played in stream you hefted rock, clasped hands in prayer a man of words, a poet, rare as sunlight filtered all your schemes the roads oft taken were not serene you stumbled, but you never fell you gathered thoughts on which to dwell the softer side you show to friends, and wisdom? Ah, that you blend with the mother I have left in you, and for this, I enjoy my view… ~*~ Dedicated... to Sy... with great respect... for his dreams have led me to visions of my own... I miss you. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is a gorgeous Tribute! ~ This is a beautiful poem... ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Karilea, this is beautiful. I miss Sy, very much, too. P.S. Did you get the email I sent you, this morning. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Sunshine, Sy was a nice guy. You have to remember that in a man, or woman. They are really somewhat rare. Bobby |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
a man of words, a poet, rare He was definitely that. *S* This is beautiful, Sunshine... Thank you so much for remembering him so kindly... I miss him, too. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Karilea, you wrote it so well, take a bow my friend, I loved it. Love Lindsay |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a wonderful tribute to a very gentle man. I too miss my morning tea with Sy. Heart Hugs~Nancy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw yes, Sy he was such a clever witty daily writer and everyone enjoyed his kind winsome comments and creations. Yes yes, he was definitely a class act. This is a delightful tribute well perceived. Eric |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I can't claim to say that I knew Sy; I can only wish that I had known him. I saw his kindness and felt it in his replies to my poetic attempts. I saw it in how he responded to all here - and I continue to see it in the love that many have for him still. I like this poem - I think it's very fitting for the man that I saw here in the poems and pictures that he and all of you have shared. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful, dear Karilea! I loved Seymour and his daily offerings, which always taught me something new. Beyond his art, I felt his gentleness and wisdom. True gifts. I do miss him. Thank you for this. Love, Margherita |
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