Open Poetry #44 |
Especially |
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The savor of your hunger rhymes, linger, in transcendent detections, wafting delicious, and intrinsic, in balmy, and exotic. As your verses, bear your fragrance, upon me, the estrus, of your carnality, filling me, intoxicated, within these odes of you, of your evocative, and solicit. You, are my favorite word. In your eyes hieroglyphic, began alphabet, for me, and, sonettos, of syllables. Your lips, two Iliad’s luscious, pulsating, swollen, with a thousand multitudes. Your mouth, an odyssey in itself, filled with, semantics, and venus, engaged in twists of tongue, and paragraphs, of paramour. Hold firm the dictionary of libidinous between your columns, as you taste of punctuation, upon your skin, our juxtaposition of yearn and sigh, a cacophony of trill, and assonance. Create with me, our rhythm in rhyme, in waves impale and salts, of time. Where windnotes of rhapsody braid your tresses into tangles, and the flavorsome sounds of nightsong and chaste, become you, and unto me, as my, sustenance. Come forth, and scale my geography, where my northern peak supports, your southern savannah, and both titillating terrains, erogenic. Pound down the pillar of your achievement in me, as I fabricate your form and submission, until eyes rolled and behold the unforgiven, of rule and abstinence, as the taste of gasp and spasm linger, on your beam. Let me design you with blueprint, as I paint the walls of your interior with valentine, and vibrant, generosity. Your ample frame anchored, and surmounted by stud, and plaster. Your foundation filled, with soundness and memory. Let me tongue trace a heart on your lips as it pierces you, like a serpent of thought through the moistness, of your muse, with surfeit seam and boldness in between as your taste, trembles with mine, while I sunder your separation, with protrusion. Like the polished hard stone, my ardor tumbles, down the river toward you, awash in sweetened brine and purity, it meanders, through solitude and eon, making its way to the ocean, of your cleft. Your touch, so new to me, like morning, as your body molds itself about fingers, and breath, the lushness of your vista splayed out, in its vulnerability, and seclusion. Let moon breeze carry my songs of humility to you, of melodies not yet whispered, to the hunger, of your neck, impregnated, with the sweat of thirst. As I wait to show the feel of my, high esteem for you. Thank you, for the lessons taught. To know dying, that I never really knew, anything, until us. And for the gift of belief, once more. Especially, in someone, like you. [This message has been edited by Richy (02-16-2009 04:29 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"thud" .... .... these words were like rapids, dear Richy, or like having sipped a flut of champagne that makes one unsteady ... then here I am now looking out of the window and the sun is high already. But wasn't it midnight just now? Gosh, you are one of a kind, dear romantic Richy! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rich, it was "Especially" nice of you to write this for and about, me! ~ Ya, right! In my dreams! Whew, man, you sure know how to give this gal the vapors!!! I suppose you know the icon that is about to follow ~ Yeppers! It's ~ I'm so predictable! Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you are a charmer of words making them rise from the page into the readers theatre of mind and heart.. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I'm dumbfounded Richy. This is spectacular. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richy....Amazing word forplay. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Richy - your command of the English language is most amazing. I'm in awe of your talent... BC |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Such a romantic tasty treat Hope |
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