Conversation Between Seasons (Breaking The Ice)

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Open Poetry #44

Conversation Between Seasons (Breaking The Ice)

CrazyHorse
Junior Member

since 2008-08-23

Posts 31
New-Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2009-02-15 08:11 PM

The branches bore heartbeats
As the leaves hit the ground
Where they rolled and they tumbled
To the beat of their own sound

And the hearts, they dripped heavy
And the words they came fast
From the mouth of September
To a July two years passed

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2009-02-15 09:16 PM

This is a sad one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2009-02-16 07:36 PM

Nice use of seasonal change to convey feelings.

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

3 posted 2009-02-18 10:00 PM

Beautiful, just beautiful.

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