Open Poetry #44 |
The Silent Debate Goes On |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
The Silent Debate Goes On Over the past few days I have searched everywhere It appears my muse has left Seems its no longer there How can I begin to write Feels like the loss of a friend As my muse remained silent Nothing had been penned As I burn the midnight oil Sat here with my pen in hand Many nights have been spent Far away from dreamland The silent debate goes on Here between heart and mind Perhaps this will explain why The words are hard to find Too wide awake to sleep As I ponder through the night Still there was the part of me Who was longing to write HopeĀ©2009 |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Hope, sometimes the most beautiful thoughts are the one's never heard. How nice that even in your silence comes gold. (whisper) Pssst my dear, this was wonderful (whisper) |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Beautiful poem, well penned, The thought s of others always make for excellent poems Bessings to you.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I can really relate to this, Hope. Eventually, the words do come forth if they are meant to be shared. |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
I burn the midnight oil Sat here with my pen in hand Many nights have been spent Far away from dreamland This is written for my moments... I love your poetry. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you have a wonderful style with words and your muse is never far from you, just resting at times |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
nice |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Greatly Enjoyed... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hang in there Hope, we all have times when the words won't come, but I'm sure that a poet of your expertise will soon be back with plenty of more wonderful poems. Love Lindsay |
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