Open Poetry #44 |
Perfection (Valentines Post) |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Perfection a dark, empty room in a vacant house filling with light a bare-tree vale in a boundless forest filling with snow a longing heart in a bereft form filling with love sublime perfection ---b. e. adams (2/14/2009) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (02-15-2009 10:18 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful visuals, dear Bruce! Your eyes and your heart hold perfect beauty. Happy Valentine's Day! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
lovely |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A fine romantic 'longing' valentine. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Beautiful imagery. All empty things long to be filled. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A Valentine's thought as soft as snowfall in the barren vale, Bruce. Thanks, art |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you for sharing. Alison |
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