Open Poetry #44 |
Vienna Moons |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Vienna Moons Paris was fine but right now Vienna's on my mind, where my sweet lover is waiting for me there, calling me everyday to tell me how dearly she cares. And if I were there I'd be admiring her dearly, loving her sincerely; we'd be holding each other tight enjoying the pleasures of the night, I'd be inside of her bedroom, in the aroma of her perfume, soaking up the moonlite in the warm glow of a Vienna moon. JamesLee 12February 2009 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (02-15-2009 02:46 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As always you long and dream so sweetly and romantically, dear James. Love and Happy Valentine's Day, even at distance! Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, This is lovely. In the line: "I'd me admiring her dearly," perhaps you mean "be" instead of "me". Bobby |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Beautiful work James. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A sweet tender post my friend, Very romantic to say the least. You penned it well James. Lindsay |
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