Open Poetry #44 |
Clouds |
gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Whether heavy and gray in the cold of winter, or in the dark, nimbus plumes of summer, we look to them with attachments from long ago---like soft, warm blankets, shielding us from the ghosts of night---clouds, so beautiful in the melancholy of silence. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
The rain didn't come; the clouds are gone. Now I must look to the blue sky for a poem. art |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From one cloud-gazer to another, I especially liked your closing lines ~ "so beautiful in the melancholy of silence." Keep your eyes to the skies! Linda |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Yes, Linda, let these amber eyes ever look to the bright, blue skies! Thanks so much, art |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am glad that you looked to the clouds, Art, and shared your thoughts in this poem. I like it. Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You told a lot with few words with this one Art. enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I adore watching the clouds and your beautiful words, dear Art, are just after my own heart. Love, Margherita |
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