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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA 
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Fiery depths within the soul Cast temptations of self-destruction. The carrier of the soul, timid with fear Smoothes the blade over her flesh. She can’t put it down, won’t put it down. Anger rising throughout her bare body. Lying in the bathtub, water running. Deep in thought, curiosity of the other side Adrenaline running through her veins Images casting out all of her emotions She throws the blade across the room Takes a deep breath… And slowly submerges herself Under water, Undead. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I hope it is a baptism unto a new awakening! A fine, dramatic write! art |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
You totally caught the message! Good job, and thank your for your kind comments. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo ILoveTheRain, This is hard to read. Try it in black font. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
My pleasure! I appreciate the opportunity to read and share thoughts. art |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
I'm sorry, Mr. Robert, but I don't know how to change it. Could you try highlighting it to see what happens? |
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