Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Gets No Dessert |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
After running away from home, Bones is destitute and hungry. A kind hearted soul spots him, and picks him up, takes him to the Paradise Diner, and buys him a hamburger. The guy tries to talk to Bones, urges him to go back home. “Yo Mister, thanks anyway, but you don’t know nothin bout my home.” “Oh, come on now son, don’t you miss your mother?” “Don’t talk to me bout mother, my mothers a tramp, just like your old lady. Don’t talk to me bout my mother. Why aren’t you at home with your old lady if you miss her so much?” Bones response rather turns the kind soul off, and Bones doesn’t get dessert. Bones decides he better mend his ways, put a smile on his face, and treat people with money to spend on dessert a little better. He’s got to develop a line. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (02-10-2009 11:49 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So that was a bitter lesson for Bones, dear Bobby. He already had enough bitterness in his young life. Negative remarks about one's Mother are never welcome, not even if they might be true. Love, Margherita |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sad -Juju |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What Margharita says is true. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Yes it was a hard lesson for Bones. The apple dumplings with cream sauce at the Paradise Diner are absolutely scrumptious, a treat not to be missed. Bones learned to smile that day, even if he didn’t mean it. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, For reading and commenting. It was sad that Bones missed out on dessert. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Yes, mothers are usually special. This poem was inspired by one of Shirley Jackson’s short—short stories. I forget the name of it, but I'll never forget it. Love Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bones missed out on "apple dumplings with cream sauce", you say?!? Yeppers, that was a mighty BIG lesson he learned that day! lol Linda |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, Yes, you are correct. The director of the settlement house where I used to live, and work, introduced me to them about fifty years ago. They are good. Now I've gone and made myself hungry, I'll have to stop by the Paradise and see if they are still on the menu. Love Bobby |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Hey Bobby, I had to get caught up with Bones. Good job, keep 'em coming. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Bones knows about living on the edge it seems. I almost laughed, but I remember the sting of going to bed without desert! Another great episode, Bobby, art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Steve, I'm happy you're caught up with Bones. I hope you enjoy, and appreciate his life. He does have some happy moments. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, For the very kind words on this effort. Yes, going to bed without dessert was the pits. Of course going to bed without eating at all was worse. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Been there, too! Thanks Bobby. art |
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