Open Poetry #44 |
Skiddily Boop Boop Boop Ohhhhhh Wiggy Wiggy Wiggy Wiggy |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
A "friend" said, "What? and Where? is "Enlightenment" I wanted to say, "Yes,it is" in response to the statement. but, in giving allowance to the possibility that a question had been asked... I thought to reply... "It is whatever you want it to be and everything you do not want. It is the scent and sight of flowers on a Spring day. It is that which burns my skin in the Summer It is that which bites my nose in the Winter. It falls from the sky in drops and flakes It is that which I breathe and that which I bury. It does not care Meaning... it does not show preference or partiality It allows and in allowing... it allows rejection It allows the worm to feed upon the dirt. Allows the bird to feed upon the worm. Allows the cat to feed upon the bird. Allows the coyote to feed upon the cat. on and on and on It allows you to form distinctions. Allows you to say "this" IS and "that" is NOT It allows the seeming presence of "lacking" For, if "lacking" was lacking... there would be something lacking. But, with the seeming presence of "lacking"... ALL is complete It is that from which all are born. It is that which brings peace and that which wages war. It is that which brings suffering and causes sufferers to die. It is IT and cannot be "IT" without the "i" As the song says... "I like"it" I Love"It" "I" want some more of"IT" and if "you" ever think that "you" do NOT love"IT"... that's ok You love THAT too It is the first born child of the barren woman and tears of starving babies. It sits upon the surface, where ripples expand and rests in ocean depths, where thirsty fish drown." But,I could only say... "Yes,it is." *** |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Larry...? Love it! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just so, dear Larry, this was a great read. You are a wise man. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I stand in awe of your wisdom and your ability to express it , Larry. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I cannot believe you chose the same title for your write as the one I was just about to post ...seriously...existentially excellent dude... |
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WindWalker11 Junior Member
since 2008-12-24
Posts 41 |
I must agree; I too stand in awe of your wisdom and your ability to express it. this was just great. [This message has been edited by WindWalker11 (02-06-2009 06:46 PM).] |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Enlightenment, the word will never be the same again! "Wise" is only the beginning of my humble appreciation. Thanks, art |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Bravo! *S* I thoroughly enjoyed! |
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DharkOne Junior Member
since 2009-01-28
Posts 31 |
Since I see that you inivite constructive critiques, I will ( irregardless of the fact that I am new here..) offer this : Nothing I would change about anything in the body of your work - but wow it's just too bad you ran out of juice before you were able to come up with a title for it.... Seriously, that "title" just SOOO misleadingly detracts from the value of the work it is given to. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Uriah, I must say I agree with DharkOne. I think the poem is superb, excellent, powerful, magnificent, interesting, clever and held my attention, every thought-wandering-step of the way, but the title, though I sorta think I get why you did it, really does spoil the poem in my very humble opinion (and probably stops a lot of people who would enjoy it, even getting to read it). Owl |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wow! Okay, now I'm stumped. Anything I may say now will just pale into insignificance so I'll just clap my hands and nod my head. As far as I'm concerned your title sums IT all up perfectly because until the end of our days we'll never really know what IT is. So, here's to Skiddily Boop Boop Boop Ohhhh Wiggy Wiggy Wiggy Wiggy ... whatever that may be! Maybe just LIFE! Helen |
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shelerella75 Member
since 2009-01-30
Posts 58 |
this was wonderful! What a fun, yet thought provoking write. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
By George, I think you've got "IT" - and "I like it. I love it. I want some more of it." I do. Yep. This is a keeper and the title? Well it made me smile and wiggy my boop on in here. A |
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