Open Poetry #44 |
butterfly candles |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my mind was in your worshiping circle and your coin was bronze with a golden middle I didn't care if I had your head or heart when your edges were mothing to my candle you were quiet in your eyes there as we wet each other's lips with stories and then wanted to blot the sheen with another kiss colored eternity you showed me your most tender place then one that only love could enter and touch you hid it again ladylike, like temptation and wondered in your eyes if I would remember how the butterfly of you burned my wings _____________ daark (forbidden) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-10-2009 09:40 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...when the sun smiles the earth tingles, thanks ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A butterfly named temptation, success seems guaranteed. But I do hope your singed wings grow back to their full splendor. You handle fire well, dear D.! This exudes fascination. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...I am blessed that I never have to fly...only ride very fast..thanks lady!! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in the chrysalis there is darkness, warmth and peace yet she emerges. You're writing is stellar, D. Makes me long to leave incandescent trails of color on your skin. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi... my skin awaits the flattery of your tattoos..thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Scorchingly beautiful. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms ali-san |
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