Open Poetry #44 |
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Bones Leaves Home For Good |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Mom’s new man is a disciplinarian. Talk about weird, Mom teamed up with a disciplinarian. He decides right away, Bones has to be straightened out. The boy’s growing up wild and free, and everyone knows that’s no good. He gives Bones a whipping that would have killed a normal child. Bones decides it’s no longer safe at home. He takes off, and leaves Mom to her disciplinarian. Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sad. Juju -Juju |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
A dauntingly horrific experience, and you render it well. Bones has great inner-strength and wisdom, knowing when it's time for fight and when it's time for flight; that seems to be one of the keys to his survival. Mark |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, Yes, it was sad for Bones to leave Mom with that creep. However, you have to do for your own self. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Mark, Yes, Bones was always good with surviving. He knows what's what, and he looks out for number one. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad indeed but we all have choices |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Poor Bones, he can't seem to get a break.....How sad. Eric |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bobby... I am a little sad tonight and when I read this I cried... Bones deserves a loving home ... ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Passing shadows, Yes, we all do have choices. Bones probably made the right choice in this situation. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, Lots of times it's hard to come by a break. Breaks are rare for most people. Bones learned not expect them perhaps a little earlier than some. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, Don't be sad hon, and don't cry. Like most members of the human family, Bones doesn't always get what he deserves. There's loads of Bones out there. Love Bobby |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Hard to read, cause so sad. Made me feel sadly mad. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks HelmutB, For reading, and commenting. Don't be sad. Similar situations happen all the time. You'll be happy to know that Bones turned out very well. Bobby |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Vandana, I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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