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Open Poetry #44
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Boshii2
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since 2009-02-01
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0 posted 2009-02-06 06:38 PM


Dont' be shy. I don't bite he said.
But he lied.
He drew blood the first time he touched my heart.
He coaxed me to reveal more until I was naked in his hold.
My poetry exposed me.
Kindly he rearranged my anxiety,clothing me in promises.
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mein or meree thanhai
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since 2009-02-01
Posts 21
1 posted 2009-02-06 06:43 PM

nice ...., lov this....
not only a touch...,
it make a deep wound in heart..,
a sweet pain....

wait .. i want to read it again
again... again n again...
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2009-02-06 07:24 PM

Lovely, refreshing clarity and poise.
Well done.
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