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mein or meree thanhai Junior Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 21 |
Ooh... It's tough I'm tired Spin this stone to the hilltop. See... how beautiful its roll down to valley !!! Ahaha... haha Now my turn.., I'm going to cart the stone again here We can see once more it's going down Again.. again.... Again...... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very vivid scenery. Enjoyed this. It reminded me of my trekkings in the mountains, when we would accidentally push a stone and set it in motion ... wow, what a spectacle indeed (but it was dangerous for other people who might have been on a lower path). I agree it is a great view. Love, Margherita |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
Good fun,Mein or meree Thanhai, just like your poem. My turn now. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is something strong in one's dogged perseverance... enjoyed this! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Very nice. It makes me think about Sisyphus, but there is no agony here, just joy and simple abandon. art |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice thought provoking write. Over and over persistence never fails. Eric |
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