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White Butterfly
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White Butterfly |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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White Butterfly (To Diana) A white butterfly flies over these concretes searching for honey dreams, midst the catacombs, the dark alleys, bins, dust, wastes, rubbishes… I open my eyes, see the white flame there, right before me, burning in a soft whisper. I open my eyes to see the magnetic piece. It sits on my putrid finger, suddenly my body is alive, once more, producing ambrosia for pure butterflies. © 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar clever talks delay friendship! |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Interesting take on an urban Butterfly, Excellently written Annie |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Kushal, I am still as speechless as I was in my response to your email. I just can't find the words to thank you. This is an exquisite poem (as always, but this one especially so) and I don't believe I deserve it or the wonderful response you gave to my poem, "Unjust", but I accept your beautiful tributes, graciously, gratefully and I feel very honoured. I just like to help - especially special people like you with such a beautiful soul. Some people think it is meddling in their business, but I knew you wouldn't. This poem, of course, will be saved in my Pip - poddarku folder, along with so many more, but it will be my favourite. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: How absolutely beautiful, dear Ku, delicate yet powerful too! The butterfly is such an ethereal being, it causes awe. A lovely dedication too to our dear Diana. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Stunning write ku. I think you get better with every verse! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Kushal.. this is so very beautiful!! you are a wonderful poet   RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely! ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Another finely tuned write, a library keeper. Enjoyed. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Kushal, The spirit within you just flows from your poetry. I really enjoy how you express yourself. Alison |
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