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Open Poetry #44

Lost Horizons

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-02-03 06:29 PM

Lost Horizons

Take me to the place where the wind sleeps
where the sea never ripples in the breeze
where the calm of the water looks like glass
and stretches, far as the eyes can see,

let me drift along in silence
where the sky meets the edge of the water
moulding it's power into the air
no threat of any emotion to falter,

Never lose respect for the unknown
infinity travels far into illusion
it's as deep as the kassam of your mind
don't be fooled by the all the confusion,

No one really cares what happens
the water demands the respect it deserves
the sea and it's everlasting power
such as life, death, and rebirth,

Annie

3-2-2009

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-02-03 07:45 PM

Great overall write Annie, and a fantastic last stanza!

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2009-02-03 11:39 PM

I got such a sense of peace from this. Beautiful write...kat

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

3 posted 2009-02-04 03:38 AM

Thanks Guys one of my methodical moments

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2009-02-04 05:53 PM

Nice thoughts and very wise Annie....Good work!

Eric

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

5 posted 2009-02-04 06:37 PM

Thank you Dear Eric thats lovely of you to say so

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