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Inspired-8
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Pluto
0 posted 2009-02-04 12:51 PM


Winds so whisper
Amidst the fields
Air the crisper
Trees do yield

Dimming light fall
Skims the waters
Shadows tall
Heaven’s daughters

Vivid image
Prospers deep
Nature’s privilege
A moment’s keep…

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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
1 posted 2009-02-04 06:40 PM

I love this type of poem the words and the way it is written are really deep yet simple very nice writing and the meaning is very subtle


Excellent...
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