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Stealing Heavens Breath
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Stealing Heavens Breath |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Soft are the lips of my love, sweet kisses brush as feathers, stroking my cheek, upon my brow, Parting my lips within his, stealing my breath, inhaling, taking all of me into him, As his kiss lingers on, passion holds time still, in one moment, one kiss. All of life rushes before me, my yesterdays, todays,tomorrows, he holds them all between his lips, The deepest passion flows from my feet, up and throughout my body and beyond, with the soft gentle caress of his lips, He is my love, my soul, my friend, taking me above and beyond this life, high above time and space, upon his soft fluffy clouds of heaven, gently I rest inside his loving arms, awaiting another kiss, Stealing, heavens breath. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
effective Romanticism: "he is my love, my soul, my friend, taking me above and beyond this life, high above time and space..." a particularly grand-fine line: "passion holds time still, in one moment, one kiss." applause! |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A truly beautiful romantic poem. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Some kiss! Wonderful. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
lovely xoxoxo |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear A Romantic Heart, This is a lovely poem. I haven't seen you in a while. Stick around. Love Bobby |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Beautiful as always....missed you Heart! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Delicious...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
exquisite!!! (breathe...breathe...sigh...breathe...breathe) a lovely, lovely write |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Incredibly beautiful!!! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lovely poem and I especially liked the following lines .... ---------------------------------------------- sweet kisses brush as feathers, stroking my cheek, upon my brow, ---------------------------------------------- nicely done |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The sweet kiss. Life's taste of bliss. Beautiful Romantic. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Beautifully passionate poetry. It's truly, truly amazing how love and deep, deep passion and words of such can fill our hearts and souls and lift us up to places seemingly unreachable by any other means. Thanks for sharing, -Bob |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Oh, This is so incredibly perfect!!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Happy Birthday, dear Pisces Girl, true Romantic Heart! May your special day bring you much happiness and joy and may the new year of life unfold in perfect alignment to your dreams! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
ahhhh Love. Nice The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Now now! ~ I can't believe I missed this beauty! ~ Enjoyed this ARH! Goodnight!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a sweet kiss and a lovely poem. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You have a very suitable pen name. Man you're a good writer.....LOL! I mean literally....LOL! These words are beautiful and the flow is so nice. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kisses back to the top...James |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Sounds like you're in the midst of a passionate inspire here. Nothing beats the beauty of the kiss such as this, stealing heaven's breath. Beautiful. Well done. |
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