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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-02-02 06:46 PM


             

Soft are the lips of my love,
sweet kisses brush as feathers,
stroking my cheek, upon my brow,

Parting my lips within his,
stealing my breath, inhaling,
taking all of me into him,

As his kiss lingers on,
passion holds time still,
in one moment, one kiss.

All of life rushes before me,
my yesterdays, todays,tomorrows,
he holds them all between his lips,

The deepest passion flows from my feet,
up and throughout my body and beyond,
with the soft gentle caress of his lips,

He is my love, my soul, my friend,
taking me above and beyond this life,
high above time and space,

upon his soft fluffy clouds of heaven,
gently I rest inside his loving arms,
awaiting another kiss,

Stealing, heavens breath.

© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2009-02-02 07:56 PM



effective Romanticism:

"he is my love, my soul, my friend,
taking me above and beyond this life,
high above time and space..."

a particularly grand-fine line:

"passion holds time still,
in one moment, one kiss."

applause!

Suncleaver
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2 posted 2009-02-02 08:49 PM


A truly beautiful romantic poem.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2009-02-03 04:30 AM


Some kiss! Wonderful.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
4 posted 2009-02-07 08:52 PM


lovely

xoxoxo

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-02-07 09:01 PM


Yo dear A Romantic Heart,

This is a lovely poem.  I haven't seen you in a while.  Stick around.

Love Bobby

Inspired-8
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Pluto
6 posted 2009-02-07 09:07 PM


Beautiful as always....missed you Heart!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2009-02-08 12:33 PM


Delicious...James
steavenr
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8 posted 2009-02-09 12:50 PM


exquisite!!! (breathe...breathe...sigh...breathe...breathe) a lovely, lovely write
suthern
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9 posted 2009-02-13 09:52 AM


Incredibly beautiful!!! *S*
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2009-02-13 10:23 AM


Lovely poem and I especially liked the following lines ....
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sweet kisses brush as feathers,
stroking my cheek, upon my brow,
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nicely done

Richy
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11 posted 2009-02-15 10:39 AM



The sweet kiss.

Life's taste of bliss.


Beautiful Romantic.


Lighthousebob
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12 posted 2009-02-15 10:57 AM


Beautifully passionate poetry. It's truly, truly amazing how love and deep, deep passion and words of such can fill our hearts and souls and lift us up to places seemingly unreachable by any other means. Thanks for sharing,

-Bob

GothicCherry
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13 posted 2009-02-15 11:14 AM


Oh, This is so incredibly perfect!!!!
Margherita
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Eternity
14 posted 2009-02-23 09:28 AM


Happy Birthday, dear Pisces Girl, true Romantic Heart!

May your special day bring you much happiness and joy and may the new year of life unfold in perfect alignment to your dreams!

Love and hugs.
Margherita


HelmutB
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15 posted 2009-02-24 11:15 PM


ahhhh Love. Nice

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  


Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
16 posted 2009-03-26 10:32 PM


Now now! ~ I can't believe I missed this beauty! ~ Enjoyed this ARH!

Goodnight!


ARCTIC WIND

Eloise
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17 posted 2009-03-27 04:17 PM


What a sweet kiss and a lovely poem.  
ethome
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18 posted 2009-03-27 06:25 PM


You have a very suitable pen name.

Man you're a good writer.....LOL! I mean literally....LOL!

These words are beautiful and the flow is so nice.

Eric

JamesMichael
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19 posted 2009-03-29 09:27 PM


Kisses back to the top...James
Chalmette Guy
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20 posted 2009-03-30 09:02 AM


Sounds like you're in the midst of a passionate inspire here.
Nothing beats the beauty of the kiss such as this, stealing heaven's breath. Beautiful.
Well done.

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